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Poetry : Redemption
by Liam
Why be afraid of the silence,
For in silence I find not only self
I also discover my selflessness
Fear shies away from quietude for that stillness is rich
In this humble place, is found the ground
The very substance
The very substantiation
The amorphous body of consciousness
Creator of worlds, before and after
Creator in our world of here and now
This is all we ever need embrace
God in the grace of our own experience
Whisperer of truth, fountainhead of youth
Responding to moments like
We respond to salvation.
Responding to moments of how
We react to redemption .
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This is a thought-provoking and inspiring poem. The imagery of fear shying away from silence and finding self and selflessness in stillness is powerful, and the final lines about responding to moments of salvation and redemption are particularly moving. Overall, a great poem!
Tom, my appreciation and deep thanks for your response to this poem, Redemption. In my many years of writing, few people have commented on my work. I wish I knew why? Anyway, if it’s poetry, which strives to explore the core values and idiosyncrasies of our human nature that you resonate with, this poem will surely not be the last. It’s a hybrid Poetry I’ve named “New Millennium Poetry”, which has come to fruition in four volumes. The last one was published YESTERDAY! (Amazon) I’m so thrilled. Enjoy, and best wishes in this time of Advent. Liam